Did Faith tear you to pieces?
Did Hope sink your soul?
Did the Love you made room for
leave you broken or whole?
Did Life give you minutes
or moments or regrets?
Did Grace set you free
or did you already forget?
Did Faith tear you to pieces?
Did Hope sink your soul?
Did the Love you made room for
leave you broken or whole?
Did Life give you minutes
or moments or regrets?
Did Grace set you free
or did you already forget?
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Very moving piece – so clever to build a rhyme into the 42 word limit!
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Thank you!! I was in the mood for a good rhyme. :)
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Ooh. I love the transition from desperation to liberation. Beautiful.
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Thank you so much. :) I really appreciate that.
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I love this!
Sometimes the things that truly set us free are the first things we forget.
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Thanks Karen!! :) You are absolutely right.
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Very nicely done – I enjoyed this a lot.
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Thank you, thank you!
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one of my favorites so far. I loved the questions and the answers my heart gave as I read it.
Lovely.
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Thanks so much. That made my day!!
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Something I really like about this is how the rhyme scheme sets me up for something simplistic, yet the questions get me thinking…and thinking…
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Let me know if you come to any great conclusions. :) Thank you for stopping by.
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I really loved the rhythm of this!
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Thank you Stacie!
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Oooh, I like this one. Beautifully crafted.
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Thank you so very much.
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This is definitely a favorite so far. This is brilliant. I loved it! ♥
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Thanks Kathy!! That makes me so happy. :)
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I wish people would just live and stop worrying. Be grateful where they are and keep living. Loved this.
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Me too! Let’s do that. :) Thank you.
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This is one of my favorites so far. Very beautiful and I love the idea of expressing through emotions.
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Thank you so much. :)
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A very clever take on the prompt. I really enjoyed it.
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Thanks Mike!!
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Neat. I do love me a good rhyme. Well done.
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Thank you, Miss Caludette. Yours was great too.
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A fantastic, thoughtful poem. Loved the rhyme, too.
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Thank you very much for that.
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I liked the rhythm of this, too! It’s lovely!
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Thanks Jen!! Yours was great too.
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So simple yet so moving!
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Thank you, April. :)
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This is lovely, and so thoughtful. I read it several times so that I could let it all sink in. Beautifully done, Genna. Thanks for sharing it with us.
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Thank you so much Christine!! That means a lot to me.
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“Did Faith tear you to pieces?” Oh, ouch. I like the tension between the ordinary meanings and the actual effects.
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Thank you, thank you.
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Oh so very cleverly done.. I really enjoyed the rhymes of course.. but even more the use of those word Hope, Faith… leading up to Grace.
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Thank you tons. I appreciate that.
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LOVE this!
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Thanks Jennifer!!
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Such a pensive piece and great rhyming!
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Thank you, Meg. I was in need for a good rhyme. :)
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I love poems like this where it just feels like these words were meant to be together. So well thought out. I appreciate the work these little rhyming poems take. The rhythm can be killer!
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Oh! What kind words. Thank you so much. :)
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