diamonds are forever

Jabbing it beneath my nose, she squealed. I said YES! Giddy coworkers descended, clamoring for details like gulls for a fry, their squawks muzzled by the ringing in my ears. What’s forever with you to her is forever without you to me.

17 thoughts on “diamonds are forever

  1. Ooh. That last sentence just says it all, reveals a new layer and adds a whole new dimension to the story. “What’s forever with you to her is forever without you to me.” Zzzing. Ouch. You just dropped the bomb right there….

    Really well done, my favorite I’ve read so far.

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